Kitchen

[wynoi]

This is my very first work in 3d. I'm using Autodesk VIZ 2008 (similar to max) rendered with mental ray 3.5. All using A+D material.


Any critics and suggestions are welcome :)

[Seeda]

hi wynoi !

The light is good anyway.
the sampling is too low ( i know its a testrendering ).
The wooden texture of that bright cupboard is completely wrong, this is a texture for a floor . The venire should reach from the floor too the top of the cupboard, and the direction of the venire from the rest of the kitchen seems to be starnge too, i`ve learned that venire should follow only one direction on a furniture, exepting you are making special venireworks.

Regards Seeda.

[wynoi]

yeah.. i also notice i put a wrong material after rendered. :( too bad.
I should learn some more. :)

[peengoh]

well, i have a couple of comments, you should try not to make your edges so hard, a bevel or chamfer would help, those look like knifes. Also, some AO, right now everything looks a bit like it is floating.
and finally i think the scale on the wooden floor is too big.

cheers, keep the good work!