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this is my peugout car concept contest design.. hope u like it..
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m98/de_junz/jembatanfinal1000px.jpg
bmcaff
03-13-2007, 09:46 AM
Nice render Junz and interesting concept. I hope you don't mind if I make a few comments. Firstly loose the lens flare especially in the lower section of the image. Also you could do with a better sky image and some subtle weathering on the structural elements in the background. The railing in the foreground could be left out or blurred slightly as it is stealing focus from the car.
Shimrod
03-13-2007, 10:02 AM
+1 for the lens flare, and i agree too for a DOF on the foreground (at less, I think it needs more smooth, we can see the polys).
For me, the reflections are a bit strong on the car shader, but just a personal taste. :rolleyes:
About the picture it-self, I just think the reflection of the "lamp" (don't know the word in english, for the lights on the side of highways :o ) breaks the curve of the car's top, because of its shape. Perhaps move it could enhance this part of your concept.
Except that, great job, it's a nice picture ! :cool:
Hope too you don't mind for these comments. ;)
AlecMoody
03-13-2007, 10:06 PM
I agree with what the other have said. As far as you concept goes, I think the back end sweeps up too much. It would look better if the line/curve followed around to the back more than up.
Personaly I on the contrary would prefer to leave the tail as it is and lift a bit the front part. Now it look too slim.
Anyway- great work!
Pixelwelder
03-14-2007, 07:30 AM
Nice concept ;)
thx for all the comment actually i have the z-depth pass to create a depth of field effect.. but not on this image.. i'll fix that later.. and improve the atmosphere :)
thx for the input.. i hope u like the changes :)
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m98/de_junz/betteratmosphere.jpg
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