my first ever try..plzz critique

[ratika]

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Hello all,
since I am beginner, this is my first ever try on three point lighting photographic view, any critique is appreciated.. Plzzz do!!

I would like to request one thing..plzz critique in little detail.

thank you all

[2bitfxprod]

Pretty good for your first try. Congrats. One thing I would suggest, in cg there is a tendency to make black things "black" (0,0,0) in rgb. But in real life things aren't truly black. There would be some diffuse response. also some specularity on the cloths would help to give it shape. I would also suggest getting a little more rim light on the screen right side of his face. My personal taste would also suggest elevating your key light some but that is purely opinion and if the look you were going for was to have a lower key light then ignore that comment. Again congrats on your first try.

Rob

[ratika]

Pretty good for your first try. Congrats. One thing I would suggest, in cg there is a tendency to make black things "black" (0,0,0) in rgb. But in real life things aren't truly black. There would be some diffuse response. also some specularity on the cloths would help to give it shape. I would also suggest getting a little more rim light on the screen right side of his face. My personal taste would also suggest elevating your key light some but that is purely opinion and if the look you were going for was to have a lower key light then ignore that comment. Again congrats on your first try.

Rob
Thank you for your valuable suggestion, i would definitely try and get back back to have critique...
Thank you very much once again.:):)